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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

That's got to be one of the weirdest semi-vampire-type-origin-myths I've ever read.

Works though...

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Nick Winney's avatar

i am now very happy 😀 thank you again

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Nick Winney's avatar

Thats exactly what i was aiming for... but theres a couple of other nods to other traditions in there... i wish I hadn't misspelled tauroctony though...

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I had no idea it was a misspelling - you are aware of the edit function though, yes?

And I do hope you can complete the whole story/novel. Although being quite a postmodern kind of girl I love the idea of jumping into a story halfway through.

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Nick Winney's avatar

i am not sure if this one is going to be the one i roll the sleeves up for but I can post another chapter here and there... see what you think...

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

You should definitely post a few chapters. Get some feedback (I'll certainly offer my two cents for what it's worth), refine it, get more ideas, then you'll be motivated to finish, I'm sure...

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Nick Winney's avatar

what more could one ask for!

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Nick Winney's avatar

theres a few more chapters of this... key moments that ive got down. also some of the themes from "that universe" have been borrowed for "You're never alone"

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