I’m definitely a binge girly! I can’t wait for the next part though. There are so many great storylines going on right now, I really applaud your serial skills man, taking notes for sure.
So glad you like it. the concept of the sisters has really got to me actually so theres a bit of a side story developing. having to spend time plotting things better now...moving parts.
the chanting squares thing is inspired by this amazing sardinian folk singing i once saw.
It’s so cool when past experiences inform writing! I’m continually impressed with this series. It honestly feels like a TV series in the making - the visuals are so intense and the character development so well done. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
I'm enjoying the Sisters references of course. Naturally, I shall be expecting loads more. Especially seeing as quite a few of these characters are clearly on a mission.
There's got to be a reptile house in there somewhere. And a poison door. And someone called Alice...
yes...my pause for more detailed plotting suggests at least 2 or 3 more chapters... ive made rather too many characters and ideas now... and then there's a turmeric story that had pushed in.
Part 4 and more to come?! Have you been possessed by a daemon, Nick?!
Of course, you have left us wanting to know more. And more I want to know!
Keep it coming 😊
Thanks Zivah! it doenst seem like there's far to go with the story…until i start writing each scene…
also…looking up the Latin always takes me down into “the portal” 😝
Ah yes, the Latin. I’m currently in the realm of resurrecting my Latin studies from a few decades ago. It is, indeed, a portal…
I am loving this so much! In my next life I want to be a Sister:Last. Pretty sure they’re my favorite 🖤
OMG ITS the best when someone reads them all one after the other.... you know youve got them hooked!
you made my absolute day!. theres some plants in tthere too...poisony ones of course...
I’m definitely a binge girly! I can’t wait for the next part though. There are so many great storylines going on right now, I really applaud your serial skills man, taking notes for sure.
Nick, this world you’ve created just keeping getting richer and more textured. I loved the image of sisters chanting in their squares. So well done!
Hi Garen
So glad you like it. the concept of the sisters has really got to me actually so theres a bit of a side story developing. having to spend time plotting things better now...moving parts.
the chanting squares thing is inspired by this amazing sardinian folk singing i once saw.
It’s so cool when past experiences inform writing! I’m continually impressed with this series. It honestly feels like a TV series in the making - the visuals are so intense and the character development so well done. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.
https://youtu.be/ZFqL_-oXjMA?si=e8Sgy5vMmCHzQDZ2
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I'm enjoying the Sisters references of course. Naturally, I shall be expecting loads more. Especially seeing as quite a few of these characters are clearly on a mission.
There's got to be a reptile house in there somewhere. And a poison door. And someone called Alice...
reptile house.....there might just be one of those...poison...well that's a given after the last chapter...
yes...my pause for more detailed plotting suggests at least 2 or 3 more chapters... ive made rather too many characters and ideas now... and then there's a turmeric story that had pushed in.