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Zivah Avraham's avatar

What an excellent part 2, Nick!

It feels like you’ve spent weeks creating this story and I can’t wait for part 3 (what a bonus for it to be longer than intended!). The Gormenghast feel continues…

As a little aside - I’m sure it’s me, but the purge of fire description reminds me of the blue flame of lit brandy on a Christmas pudding - it made me hungry!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Your writing is so detailed and vivid! I’m looking forward to part three and more from this mysterious scientist.

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