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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Great ominous atmosphere! I want to know more about the dolphins now, and about whether there were any nasty consequences of those scraps of flesh rotting away that the Voice hasn’t realized are there?

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Derek LaPorte's avatar

Love it Nick! I like the increasing unease about the game. And the indifference of the Voice to the humans in the tube is a great touch.

I love the build up to Audience with the Voice. So much so that I think you should expand on it because I crave more with Voice near the end and I felt definitely the word count for prompt quest limited your off-ramp on the story.

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