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Garen Glazier's avatar

Daaaaammmmnnn, Nick, you went there! This is weird and a little filthy but works so well. Looking forward to part II.

Nick Winney's avatar

Thanks Garen! part2 IS out…the filthy goes on… don't think ill be doing filthy again.

Garen Glazier's avatar

I feel like you’ve unlocked a new skill we didn’t know you had. Shame to put it behind closed doors again but good to know you can call upon it when needed. 😉

Jeannine Lawall's avatar

Yowch. That is a scary witch! I'm wondering how this will turn out...

Nick Winney's avatar

ach... she wouldn't hort a floi so she wouldn't...

Jeannine Lawall's avatar

Ah, but Sarah's not a fly...

NJ Fiction's avatar

This is GREAT!! Bahaha such wonderful twisted madness

Nick Winney's avatar

so glad you liked it! cheered me right up NJ 😆 thank you

Saint-Lazare's avatar

Okayyyyyy... Heading to part 2 then

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

For some reason I've got The Virgin Prunes' Pagan Lovesong in my head.

This is all so very twisted and weird. I like it.

Liz Zimmers's avatar

Astounding, Nick! This is so rich and powerful; the depths of the situation and family ties, the old magic licking like dark flames, everyone’s broiling needs…I loved it! On to Part 2!

Gregory Blair's avatar

Holy, unholy, wholly (and hole-ly) hell! This is nuts! In a good, if horrifying, way!

Nick Winney's avatar

thank you! all boxes ticked ! part two coming v soon!

Jessica Maison's avatar

Gotta be careful with that Old Magick! The "witch" is such a great character. I forgot this was a two-piece story! Ready for part 2.

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

Goddammit Nick, reading this is how I’m starting my day.

Love the characters, the slow building of tension, and I feel gross. When’s pt. 2?

Nick Winney's avatar

its written but i’m going to shorten it. glad you liked it so far! a departure for me hehe

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

You're twisted, I love it. I look forward to the next!

Nick Winney's avatar

it won't be long...

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

Well this wasn’t what I was expecting hahah